Peer Review for Group 1

By Kristin, Tanuj, and Kiarah.

Thoughts and Inspirations from your Lesson

Poetry is vulnerable and yet so so fun. How do we help students people feel comfortable to participate? For me, the option to complete it alone is key. Below I have written a poem trying to incorporate some of the techniques you intend to teach, inspired by the way it feels to let ideas flow instead of stopping them in fear.

Read my poem out loud?

Read my poem out loud?
The last time I spoke in public – I – I – I 
was speechless.
Shaking and quivering, in my boots,
like a cold winters day and I forgot my jacket. 

But now, alone in my room, 
I have warmed up.
No longer ice, the poetry flows, 
and waters the parts of me
where fear, was still as rock. 

Read my poem to myself?
The words pause, lash, and slow, 
exactly where they are supposed to.
Speaking for itself,
speaking for me. 


Additional Thoughts

  1. We are not able to view the Power Point slides, are you able to update the link?
  2. The instructions associated with slides 3-7 do not include independent instructions, are these on the slides? If not, have you considered adding additional information for people completing it on their own?
  3. Are there any additional tools you could use to engage people working virtually in different ways? (ex. videos explaining the techniques, or poetry readings, to diversify from al the slide reading.)
  4. Do you have any prompts or additional resources available for students who want to take this further but need guidance or direction?
  5. Are there any opportunities for individual/virtual assessment other than self reflection? (ex. a quiz with answers to meet the identification/recognition learning outcomes, or a virtual space for peer interaction and student to student assessment).

We really enjoyed this lesson and the opportunities to engage with different poetry. Here’s hoping it inspires some of your learners to go even further in their own learning!

Blog Post 4

  1. What kind of interaction would the video require from your students? Does it force them to respond in some way (inherent)?

    The video does not force learners to respond and does not provide inherent interaction. The video itself would fall under learner-generated interaction between learner and material on the media and student interaction table (figure 9.6.4) in Chapter 9.6 Interaction of Teaching in a Digital Age.
  2. In what way are they likely to respond to the video on their own, e.g., make notes, do an activity, or think about the topic (learner-generated)?

    Learners are likely to respond by doing their own internal reflecting and making connections while they watch the video. They may also opt to jot down some notes or explore related videos through the recommended videos that Youtube offers. Additionally, this video mentions the Implicit Associations Test that they will complete later in the module. The video offers arguments for and critiques of this test which may prompt critical thinking around this assessment.
  3. What activity could you suggest that they do after they have watched the video (designed)? What type of knowledge or skill would that activity help develop? What medium or technology would students use to do the activity?

    We suggest that learners post their thoughts and reflections on the module Padlet we have created. This is an anonymous forum where students can share with each other without fear. They can also read their fellow learners thoughts which might prompt them to consider different ideas and perspectives.
  4. How will you address any potential barriers for your learners in the use of this video to ensure an inclusive design?

    One of the ways we plan to address barriers for this video, and all other videos is to remind students of the features that Youtube has built. Before the video we will issue a reminder that Youtube offers features such as closed captions, transcripts and playback speed options (slower and faster). This will hopefully help those who have difficultly hear, or playing the video out loud, as well as those who may prefer the video to play at a different speed for a variety of reasons such as being on a time crunch or wanting to watch slower to be about to take better notes. Additionally, we will remind students that they can pause the video at any point and return where they left off. This will be especially important for another video we plan to show which is on the longer side. We will also embed the video into the module so they can watch without having to leave the module web page.

Inclusive Design – Blog #3

One way that I plan to make the assessments in my learning resource more inclusive is by providing options for completion. The original plan my group had made for one of our assessments was to include a written reflection on what they have learned and how it could be applied to their everyday thinking. While this is an assessment that many of our learners may like and be comfortable with, it is limiting to others. We will include the option to complete the reflection in a variety of ways including formal writing, verbal presentation, or with an alternative artifact such as a poem, story, art piece, or video. The options are not limited to allow learners to engage with content in a way that helps them build a connection to it and allows for their autonomy. 

The first time I was introduced to an assessment that was open like this I was initially terrified. I had never been given the choice on how to submit an assignment and had no idea where to start. Then one day inspiration struck. I had visualized something I wanted to create that represented the knowledge I wished to present. That assessment, and the learning that surrounded it, has stuck with me because engaged with it in a way I never had before. 

In my case I was not allowed to submit my assignment in the form of formal writing, which is what forced me to go in another direction. However, I am hesitant to not allow learners to choose this option as it is very accessible and well-practiced for many. This is beneficial for those who may be restricted by time or circumstance from choosing an alternative method.

I will also note that where possible we will add alternative ways to engage with our learning resources. Any videos that we provide will have the option of closed captions and/or a transcript available. As well as group discussion that will allow students the opportunity to discuss what they learned and potentially fill gaps or missed information. 

I found this video on UDL that was informative if anyone would like to watch.

Response to Raspberry Cheesecake

Wow!

I really appreciate all the details and attention you have put into this first part of your assignment. I think that the learning outcomes you have highlighted are so important for people today.

While I understand the primary goal is to learn strategies to navigate these platforms more safely, I wonder if your module will include any resources on how to reduce use? Specifically regarding social media algorithms which primary goal is to keep you engaged regardless of the content. Algorithm developers have used techniques similar to those employed by the gambling industry in order to keep users coming back for more (Burrell & Fourcade, 2021). Here’s an interesting video that is a bit more accessible than the article I have cited if you are interested.

Looking forward to seeing your resource!

Burrell, J., & Fourcade, M. (2021). The Society of Algorithms. Annual Review of Sociology47(1), 213–237. https://doi.org/10.1146/annurev-soc-090820-020800

Response to Frankie

Hi Frankie!

I really enjoyed your description of direct instruction and I appreciate your recognition that it may not be best suited for your topic. I love direct instruction’s emphasis on “meeting students at their skill level, and emphasizing mastery of the basics”. While I understand not really beneficial for many other skills, such as problem solving or critical thinking, the basics are so important in building foundational knowledge.

It’s truly engaging to see the way all these instructional styles can cascade and work together by recognizing the strengths of different approaches.

Thank you for sharing what you have found!

Inquiry-Based Learning: What Is It And Is It Relevant To My Learning Resource?

Background

In Queen’s University’s instructional strategies resource, Lee et al. defines inquiry-based learning as an “array of classroom practices that promote student learning through guided and, increasingly, independent investigation of complex questions and problems, often for which there is no single answer” (n.d.). This approach to learning is said to be based on John Dewey’s philosophy that learning starts with the curiosity of the learner. (Queen’s University, n.d.). This requires the learner has some internal motivation to learn and problem solve.

Characteristics

There are 5 steps central to the inquiry-based learning process. These steps, stated by Christopher Pappas (2021) are as follows:

  1. Ask questions
  2. Probe into various situations
  3. Conduct analyses and provide descriptions
  4. Communicate findings
  5. Reflect on the information and knowledge attained

Additionally, in a study on inquiry-based learning in higher education, the goal of the educators was presented as helping the students become proficient at answering three questions: what do we know, what do we not know, and what do we need to know? (Summerlee, 2018).

Inquiry-based learning starts with a problem or a question, and learning happens through the process of finding the answer(s), not just the answer itself.

Benefits

Some of the benefits of this approach include:

  1. Increased engagement and deep understanding.
  2. Improved research, critical thinking, and communication skills.
  3. Practice tackling real life questions and issues.
  4. Promoting diverse opinions, ideas, and backgrounds.

Application

This approach is very popular for science curricula (Pedaste et al., 2015), but I believe aspects of it can be applied to a variety of subject areas as well. Questions can be asked, explored, and reflected on in many areas. When these questions are internally motivated the learning that happens is in line with constructivist ideologies, allowing the learner to create meaning from their own experiences.

Relevance To My Learning Resource

For my learning resource, one of the assessments I will be using involves developing a plan to help inform and empower people to find and use the health resources available to them. Inquiry-based learning could be a beneficial approach as it involves the development of a solution to a problem. Additionally, this approach emphasizes learning through the process of inquiry and as such will be useful for the research component of this assessment.

However, when comparing inquiry-based learning to design thinking, a critical component is missing. Design thinking always beings to solve a problem with empathy. In the case of health resources and dealing with diverse populations, I think that this approach is more appropriate. Viewing this situation as an opportunity to help as opposed to a problem to solve would allow for more empathy for those in a variety of situations.

Resources

Ertmer, P. A., & Newby, T. J. (2013). Behaviorism, cognitivism, constructivism: Comparing critical features from an instructional design perspective.Performance Improvement Quarterly, 26(2), 43-71.

Pappas, C. (2021, May 12). Instructional Design Models and Theories: Inquiry-based Learning Model. eLearning Industry. https://elearningindustry.com/inquiry-based-learning-model

Pedaste, M., Maeots, M., Siiman, L.A., Jong, T., van Riesen, S. A. N., Kamp, E. T., Manoli, C. C., Zacharia, Z. C., Tsourlidaki, E. (2015). Phases of inquiry-based learning: Definitions and the inquiry cycle. Educational Research Review, 14, 47-61 https://doi.org/10.1016/j.edurev.2015.02.003

Summerlee, A. J. S. (2018). Inquiry-based learning: A socially just approach to higher education. Journal of Human Behavior in the Social Environment, 28(4), 406–418. https://doi.org/10.1080/10911359.2018.1438956

Queen’s University (n.d.). Inquiry-Based Learning. https://www.queensu.ca/ctl/resources/instructional-strategies/inquiry-based-learning#:~:text=Inquiry%2Dbased%20approaches%20to%20learning,Critical%20thinking

Learning Design Blueprint

Cumulative Inequality and Resiliency’s Impact on Health Outcomes
Kristin Kohlmeier

Description

Cumulative inequality theory posits that both disadvantage and advantage can accumulate through a lifetime and result in corresponding impacts on one’s health (Ferraro & Shippee, 2009). For example, those who have advantages early in life, such as financial resources, can leverage them for future gain; those who are disadvantaged early in life, with no access to financial resources, may face additional hardships and barriers in the future. This example of financial resources is extremely relevant to health outcomes as there have been links found between socioeconomic status and stress hormones that can negatively impact one’s health (Cohen, Doyle & Baum as cited in Ferraro & Shippee, 2009). However, this research may feel bleak without the additional nuance provided by Seery, Holman & Silver that explores the way facing some adversity may contribute to personal resiliency and a feeling of mastery in one’s life (2010. Human agency and resiliency are powerful forces for combating negative health outcomes and educating people on this can help empower them. By studying these theories, learners will gain a deeper understanding of the variety of challenges people face and tools to help them tackle these challenges.

Misconceptions

One common misconception people have about health outcomes is that they are entirely genetic. In fact, there are a variety of determinants of health and most of them are not genetic. Consider the World Health Organization’s (WHO) examples of determinants of health (2024). This is a harmful misconception as it simultaneously removes blame from systems that can cause harm, and makes individuals feel as though they can make little impact on their health.

Interest

This topic is of interest to me as a sociology student who wants to focus on the sociology of health and education. I find it disheartening that so many systems and structures our society has set up are failing so many people. Using education as a tool, I want to empower people to take action in their communities. Knowledge is power and understanding these theories can benefit us all as we face a myriad of challenges, particularly those impacts our health.

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Resources

For this module students will need access to a computer and the internet. They will also need to access scholarly articles from the University of Victoria Library. Additionally, if they choose, they can record their personal reflection via pen and paper instead of sharing it online.

Responsibilities

All roles and responsibilities assumed by Kristin. Effort has been made to contact group members and professor to no avail, and as such, all work will be completed and submitted by me.

Response To MadyChase04

Thank you for sharing this visual you found. I find it very interesting how we all visualize concepts differently. When I was reading the text by Ertmer and Newby, their explanation of the theories as a continuum really stuck out to me as I discussed in my post. However, it is very interesting to see these theories visualized in this way and I appreciate you sharing this!

I also thought that constructivism was my personal favourite, especially for its ability to set learners up for success through practical experiences. One of my favourite pedagogical thinkers if Paulo Freire for this reason. His belief that learning should be situated in the lived experiences of the learner, and his pedagogy of the oppressed which focuses on learners developing a consciousness that has the power to transform their situation are inspiring to me. All of this fits in line with what you said about being a guide to learning, which allows people to get to the knowledge themselves through their own experiences.

Response To Kiarah

I really appreciate your personal reflection on which learning theory works best for you. Understanding what works for you may give you deeper insight into how to apply it to learning design. I also appreciated that even though you don’t think the other two work quite as well for you, you were still able to recognize how they could be applicable to different people or settings.

On another note, you mentioned that your preference for a constructivist approach to learning may explain your draw to psychology. I felt similarly about constructivism and my interest in sociology. Specifically, the sociological theories that fall under symbolic interactionism. Symbolic interactionist theories are ones that focus on the meaning created through our interactions. Different people can hold different meanings based on their different interactions. If you’re interested in learning more, watch this quick video.

My Crochet Journey – Knowing What, Knowing How, Reflection-In-Action

While reading Ertmer and Newby’s article on instructional design and theories of learning (2013), my main take away was that each learning theory is beneficial in different instances. Variables such has what is being learnt and what information the learner already has, both impact what methods will be most efficient. This take away is unsurprising to me when I consider my own learning experiences. Specifically, the idea of a learners’ knowledge changing with increased familiarity with content. Ertmer and Newby describe a continuum of knowledge development that corresponds to different learning theories. This continuum starts with  “knowing what” (behaviourist), moves to “knowing how” (cognitivist) and proceeds to “reflection-in-action” (constructivist) (2013). This continuum is easily identifiable for me when I examine my process of learning how to crochet. 

At the beginning of 2020, when COVID-19 began, I had a lot of free time due to a temporary lay off caused by my place of employment closing. This free time prompted me to pick up crocheting. I had never touched a crochet hook or yarn before but decided this would an enjoyable way to spend my time. 

Knowing What

My journey with crochet began with a lot of frustration, counting stitches, and ripping things apart. It began by trying to master the basic steps required to do the act of crocheting. I watched a variety of YouTube videos (instruction), which presented the task of specific steps (environmental stimuli), for me to accurately relay (response). I received instant feedback when what I produced either matched or did not match what I was attempting. This method of instruction is certainly the most efficient for tasks like this which involve repetitive action that has a desired outcome. I soon began to understand exactly what was required for a variety of stitches and was able to create simple patterns. 

Knowing How

After I was able to follow patterns and consistently and accurately repeat the required steps, the process by which my learning progressed started to more closely resemble that of cognitivism. I began to alter the crochet patterns I had previously followed by using my understanding of how different steps worked. I would problem solve by attempting different strategies and I became a more active participant in my learning by exploring and becoming more creative. I built on my prior knowledge to the point where I could memorize patterns, recall different strategies to alter patterns, and even develop my own patterns. 

Reflection-In-Action

The next step in my crochet journey becomes much more abstract, just as I feel that constructivism can be slightly abstract, especially in its subjectivity. After I developed this skill that I had spent months attempting to improve and master, I started to reflect on my values and whether this skill aligned with them. While I deeply value art and creative expression I had began to occasionally sell the pieces that I made which took me away from creating for myself towards creating for others. I started to see people purchasing things I had made and use them once or twice before they went to rot in the back of someone’s closet for years. While this made me feel unappreciated, it also made me feel like I was contributing to overproduction and overconsumption. I began to construct a new meaning of this skill from my reflection on personal values. I now crochet far less often and am more mindful when I do. 

It is clear to me that all three of these learning theories are essential for different phases of learning. Had I started my crochet journey with cognitivist practices I likely would have been a lot more frustrated with the process and unable to make any efficient progress. Had I started with constructivist practices I may never have mastered the skill because I would not have had the motivation. It also feels important to note that while this continuum seems very linear when laid out in this way, in actuality I felt there was a lot of back and forth, and overlap in each step. The learning process has never felt linear to me and often requires stepping backwards, unlearning, and relearning. 

Ertmer, P. A., & Newby, T. J. (2013). Behaviorism, cognitivism, constructivism: Comparing critical features from an instructional design perspective.Performance Improvement Quarterly, 26(2), 43-71.

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